Monday, January 2, 2012

'Sisters' Reviewed

Got an anonymous 3-star review for 'The Sisters of Jezebel' on Barnes and Noble. Called the story 'muddled', and complained of grammatical errors that I couldn't find when I did a re-check. Did discover that I tend to over use 'There was ...' and 'There were ...'. From now on a final proof will include a special 'FIND' of the phrases to see if I can make the sentences more active.

Interesting of how a critique of so little substance still led me to something that needed improvement.

~Will

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